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People will call us Brave if we stand and fight our own fear

People will call us Creative if we can amaze the others with the way we think

People will call us Talented if we know our own ability and are willing to develop it

People will call us Coward if we do not try to defeat ourselves

People will call us Smart if we never give up looking for the answer

People will call us Winner if we act bravely, creatively, talentedly, and smartly even though we are not
Just a little motivational short poetry that I found on my old block note :)
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WhisperofDawn Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010   Photographer
here's a critique - the line in parentheses is what you could change your original line to fix some mistakes in it:

People will call us Talented if we know our own ability and willing to develope it (People will call us Talented if we know our own ability and are willing to develop it)

LOVE this poem! :)
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Oops, thanks for the review ^^;
Thank you! :D
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WhisperofDawn Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010   Photographer
Sure thing! :D
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Valchryst Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Err, is that good or bad?
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Valchryst Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
The poem made me want to comment but i couldn't think of a one that actually sounded right for what i wanted to relay, so
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh, OK then ^^;
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WhisperofDawn Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010   Photographer
Nice :) Keep it up!
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks! :)
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WhisperofDawn Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010   Photographer
Yup! :)
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LostWithinDreams Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2010
On behalf of #The-Writers-Review:
I really like this poem. It is very simple, but I like how you formatted it. :]
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you for the kind review :)
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LostWithinDreams Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
You're very welcome! (:
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Souless-Journey Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2010
I love short poems! xD

The boldness gives it an extra enforcement to the motivation xD
The repetition does that as well. I can see how its motivational :p

o: hm...
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks a lot for the kind review :aww:
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Souless-Journey Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
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Avenvia Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010  Student Writer
Motivational pieces are always good, I like this =)
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Sorry I forgot, thanks for commenting! :wave:
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Avenvia Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010  Student Writer
Haha, no problem =D
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Indeed :D
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Canankk Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
I love it very much. I will copy it. :nod: :heart:
This is written on the wall of my office;
People will forget what you said
People will forget what you did
But people will never forget
How you make them feel.
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Vermouth19 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww thanks a lot dear Canan! :tighthug: :blowkiss:
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